U‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍nfortunately l filled on this module. l have a Reset essay

U‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍nfortunately l filled on this module. l have a Reset essay assignment , I already wrote it but I took 40 out of 100 that’s why I fail, in order to reset I have to fix my mistakes according to the teacher feedback Here is the feedback Feedback from my tutor This essay has achieved the learning outcomes attached to this assignment, but shows significant weaknesses in key areas. Although you have obviously committed to some research here, and adequately address the first part of the question, your essay remains stalled there. There is very little discussion of Disney’s position as a global empire in any depth, and you do not include any examination of their recent acquisitions or the impact of this on the entertainment industry. For future assignments I would strongly advise you to work on your skills in written expression. There is an argument here, but often it is obscured by poor writing. Also, revisit the referencing guide – you must include page numbers in citations – we went over this several times in class. It would be ‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍a very good idea to really get to grips with accurate referencing and how to use other people’s work in your essays – for example you have (Particulary with the Guardian article by Pulver) not accurately used quotation marks to indicate where you are using someone else’s words. It is not enough to change a few words and then cite it, at times you are using verbatim sentences. Assessment Three – Essay Brief: Topics should be thoroughly researched, include engagement with appropriate scholarly reading, and final submissions should be presented in appropriate academic style, including thorough and accurate referencing and bibliography (a filmography too, if appropriate). The word count for any bibliographies or filmographies will not be included in the overall word count. Do please remember that the module leader is unable to read full drafts of work before submission, but there will be opportunities to discuss your work in progress at both tutorials and through office hours. This should be submitted in Word format via Turni‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‌‌‍‍‍‌‍‍‍‍‌‍‍tin

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