It is great if you could make the essay sounds more thoughtful, and reduce the words because an application essay is ranged 200-650 words max. You do not need to provide any references to the essay. Also, the idea must stick with the original version. The main idea is to talk about my biggest regret that I lied to my mom to get away with traveling with my parents in breaks because I was too tired after doing exams, but then I started to realize that there is only one more year until college. Also, my wording is a bit simple. if you could spice it up to impress admissions office
The Statement of Purpose, 1-2 pages, your opportunity to
explain your reasons for seeking the MBA degree. You may discuss any of the
•Your ultimate career goals, and the ways in which you
expect the MBA to advance them.
•Personal and/or professional accomplishments that
demonstrate your ability to master new challenges
•Gaps in your existing knowledge or experience that affects
your job satisfaction or productivity, and that you believe will be addressed
by the MBA.
Please note that this statement
is your opportunity to demonstrate your written communication skills as well as
your interest in the MBA.
The study plan should be personal and unique. The experiences, education, motivation should feel like it’s specifically written for me. Please dont be generic or like a template. Here′s the outline for your reference
1. Why do you wish to study in Canada in the program for which you have been accepted?
2. What is your overall educational goal?
3. Why are you not pursuing a similar program in you country of residence or of citizenship?
4. How will this program enhance your employment opportunities in your country of residence of citizenship?
5. In the case of a minor applicant, what are your reasons for studying in Canada? What is your parents’ or guardians’ immigration status in their current country of residence?
6. Provide details of your education history – dates when the course started and ended, the name and address of the school, the course taken, qualification, degree or certificate awarded for the course.
Hi, Im applying for multiple Masters programs for Data Science. In my essay I’m not too clear of which direction to take. I have created a raw template that you can expand upon and possibly use them to highlight motives or reasonings, etc. Overall I would like for all the information to be tied together to show I’m a good fit for enrollment into one of these programs.
Revisions to my statement of purpose, mention seeking admission into a data science masters program. Tips given by an admission counselor for current essay are:
1. highlight any programming or quantitative skills and experience across
2. Explain how you used programming languages and data analysis tools across all application materials
3. Supplement with project examples
My experience with programming is at the basic level with only gaining insight through videos or shadowing friends that code. Quantitative skills will be gained across various college courses include calculus, biostats, etc.
No hands on experience using programming language which may be seen as a weakness
Describe a problem you’ve solved or a problem you’d like to solve. It can be an intellectual challenge, a research query, an ethical dilemma-anything that is of personal importance, no matter the scale. Explain its significance to you and what steps you took or could be taken to identify a solution.
I prefer this essay to be on a current issue in the world right now, racism, lgbtq+ or mental health. I’ll give you the option, but i prefer for it to be one of the 3. Thank you!
This essay should: – be analytical and argumentative (not merely descriptive) – have a functional thesis statement – be well-structured (contain a functional introduction, body and conclusion; be written in paragraphs) – be well-written (simple and correct English) – contain a bibliography (MLA format) – use parenthetical in-text citations where appropriate (MLA format) – be about 1250 words (1000 to 1500 acceptable), excluding bibliography
I have a personal statement for medical school admission that needs editing. I can provide my resume and the relevant information/story to what I wrote. The editing will need to address the comments one of my advisors provided. You can also use some of your own imagination to strengthen the story as long as it seems legitimate.
Medical Student applying for accelerated internal medicine residency program Person statement which answers: 1) Why I want to go into Internal Medicine 2) Why do I want to enter accelerated program 3) What will do if I am not accepted. Length: up to 2 pages single spaced I have many previous personal statements/resumes but I need help writing this one. Due date is not strict. I put a date where first draft would be good by?
This is for an admissions essay for Masters of Public Administration. ONE PAGE MAXIMUM FOR EACH OF THE PROMPT BELOW. Size 12 font times new roman double spaced. 1. What, in your view, is the most significant challenge facing public service professionals over the next decade? How would you go about tackling that challenge? 2. Think about a time when you worked with others toward a shared goal – a team project at school, at work, or in your community, that DID NOT succeed. Describe your experience and identify why you believe the team effort failed. What did you learn about your teammates? What did you learn about yourself? 3. The MPA program at the Colin Powell School for Civic and Global Leadership seeks to produce agents for social change. Describe a maximum of three ways in which the MPA Program at CCNY can increase your ability to lead change.